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I know I suggested changing the medic saves his brother and that works but now it made the other half of the sentence a little screwy. maybe try the medic tries to save his brother.."but the young boy suddenly stops moving..the screams fall silent. He wants to scream...but he cant because he feels like a part of his heart had just died.

or The medic is trying to save his brother. He cant hear anything anymore. The gunshots and screams of the wounded fade into the background ...all he can hear is his brother softly whimper..and then...it stops..The medic looks up and says nothing. Theres nothing to say. He feels like part of his heart had just died.

I dont know. Theres just something about this story that I like. Two thumbs up for trying to write about the video. Thats always hard to write out things you see you know to try to capture the emotion on paper. But I like this.