OMG if u dont hurry and update this wonderful wonderful fantabulous piece of beauty I will hunt you down and put a serious hurtin on you. I found it entirely by accident and can find abslutely nothing to complain about. Its beautifully written and just...wow. Pleeeeaaassssseee update A.S.A.P. and keep up the good work.
Author's response
The next chapter is currently in the works; we're starting a turn in the story, and the action continues! Hopefully to come soon!