ok.. "king of all things intense ;)" style review coming up from orbyn.. and in third person.. why??? cuz tis kwel that is why :P :
1./"But Georgia's voice broke through our short moment. "Oh my god, have you two had sex?!" Georgia exclaimed."/ six sense bout things in that matter just like... someone orbyn knows... somehow.. idk.. hmmmm :D
2./Keep your hands off my girl by Good Charlotte / orbyn is scared.. orbyn WAS listening to this song during fic :| tis an ace song!
3./"Are you bisexual?" Ben asked bluntly./ orbyn will say nuttin on this matter only.. :D:P:O:|. end.
4. orbyn thinks josh is gay. orbyn also thinks tht vicky need to watch out... josh is on the prowl for Brendon.
5./"Hey, you know I would, baby." Georgia winked/.. er NAH.. :| ;)... nuttin more!
6./"That smirk of his was so contagious!"/ what is it today with ridiculously contagious smiling.. seriously :D
Author's response
haha, THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW DUDE!! it got cut? :'( ok... no more until next update? :'( lol. yes, i know someone like that too... a six sense indeed :D. u were listening to it?! dude... tis a great song! orbyn will not say anything, but I put it in for... one reason, and 1 reason only :D. yes, perhaps orbyn thinks correctly... Vicky may need to watch out... yeah, we all know that would never happen, lol! yes, he has a contagious smile - i see it, i smile :D simple :DDD Geets xx