Once again, no alert. Darn site's bugging out on me.
I liked this chapter quite a bit, primarily because of Rita's involvement. Yes, I hate her, but you managed to write her so well that I hated her even more than I did in canon. Impressive work. I also really enjoyed the Charlie/Narcissa scene.
Thanks for the review. Looking around at all my reviews that I haven't responded to I think the site wasn't informing me of them. Anyway, glad you liked Rita.~Jim