OH SH*T!
No way will she be able to go on with the wedding after that! I wouldn't! I'd be grieving my baby's death for months.
Good story plot. I'm suspecting that this is all Tim's fault. Squinty eyes
There are a few spelling mistakes but other than that keep up this good story. Try adding a little more details; for example, I would of loved to have read about Julius' thoughts as he heard Delilah scream. When a soon-to-be father finds his life partner hurt and pregnant all sorts of fear and bad thoughts come screaming into his head before he even has the chance to react you know? Maybe in your next chapter you can have Delilah's thoughts about what the doctor just told her?
Very original idea and it's at its peak right now. Don't end this here!
Update soon!
-Gucci84