I guess I'm reviewing every other chapter, then. Hope you don't mind.
Neville, Hermione and Ron are pretty damn irritating. The thing that galls me more than even their arrogance is Dumbledore. He gives Harry's FATHER'S cloak to Neville, and forces Harry out of DADA. Even though that was actually a blessing in disguise, Dumbledore obviously didn't mean for it to be. Arrg...so angry...so very angry. This story has made me swear off treating blind people any different than anyone else. I don't think I would have done it intentionally, but some of that pity does leak through. See you in two chapters.