Oh my gosh! No I did like it! Great chapter!! The whole scar jealously bit was great. Very realistic! I could totally relate to scars feelings about Rach replacing her. Jealously is a great motivator and it dosent even have to be rational. As for pg13 or r or whatever I agree with the previous poster--I didnt get her name (Sorry) about writing what your comfotable with and skipping through the other parts just focusing on feelings and small details- but on the other hand if you want to make it an all out smutfest ;) Id still read !! keep writing!!-xoxo