I hope you'll update soon.
You handled the Quidditch better than I would have expected. Very few fanfiction authors can pull it off. I think Harry's perspective helped, though. In any case, I don't quite understand why Harry said Cedric was better than him at Seeker, but I do understand why he chose Chaser. I hope Hufflepuff annihilates Slytherin and Gryffindor. Gryffindor especially...
I know I'm getting a bit ahead of things, but my mind's been on overdrive about later books. How are you going to handle Sirius? Will people think he's after Harry or Neville? Where will he go if not the Shrieking Shack? When will Neville get his bloody head deflated? That one's not really about PoA...
And about GoF...Crouch is still going to put Harry's name into the Goblet, isn't he? Voldemort will want him, he doesn't underestimate Harry. By then, hopefully Harry will have a different type of sight to rely on, or will have at least improved the one he has. The whole "binding magical contract" thing will help the school finally recognize just what Harry's capable of, unless it's happened already. I just hope Neville doesn't find his way into the Chamber of Secrets. I think it'd be nice if he was the first victim...