I have always thought that the scene where Harry tells Hermione about her grandparents was one of your most effective scenes, and one of the more emotionally powerful in fanfiction. It has always affected me, and still does.
I also have always enjoyed Hermione's analysis of Percy's presence at the funeral. Well spotted!
Author's response
It gets me, too, and I wrote it. Glad you like my use of Percy -- that's one Weasley people don't mind me picking on.
"T"