the lack of parents I noticed but isn't really a crucial part in the story it seems. like it doesn't seem like anything is lacking. and i don't think mikey is annoying, but he should find out soon i think. but i'm not here to make suggestionss.
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Thanks! ok i think i will include gerard's mom in the next chapter, the one i am working on [still]
To me mikey seemes kind of like an over concerned brother, but yes i will make him find out probably in a few chapters ahead...