Review for An average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time

An average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time

(#) Riane46 2007-04-14

Yo it looked a bit to short "The bang" chapter, and for "Neil's Plan" was so wierd and random and Neil's Plan is stinky a bit.

Author's response

yeah my storie has sank a little, but like I said I'll make the chapters longer,