I noticed your other reviews for this chapter so decided to add mine.
Don’t listen to what readers tell you to included for the story. Suggestions for improvement are fine but when they start telling you which character fit the story YOU as the author are writing that’s not on.
You’re the author you know your characters, add who you will and stick to your plan.
Having said that, I like this chapter and liked Belle turning Harry down. Really, the way he proposed was stupid. “I doubt I’ll be able to follow through with this, but, …will you marry me?” (Shakes head “real romantic”) Perfect example of Harry’s clueless-ness about women.
I can’t wait to see how everything plays out, all the talks, potions, hormonal veela. LOL Poor Bill and Fleur though, all those Aurors crashing there wedding. And Voldemort, oh my.
Author's response
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, poor Bill, imagine the epitath, Here lies Bill, screwed into the ground . . .
Let's just say Harry's timing is a bit off and leave it at that for now.
Stick to my guns, good advice! Thanks.