Fabuloso! I love how perfectly not perfect Andy and Lindsey are for each other. I know that doesn't make sense in writing, but it does in my head. He's got issues with heart break, and she just got issues. They seem as though they are going to be so damaging towards each other, yet so good for each other. It is all very Shakspearian. I love how you write rapid updates too. I should really take a lesson or two in that. Wonderful Chapter!
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haha, I understood completely. and I pretty much love the "he's got issues with hearbreak, and she's just got issues." I couldn't have described it better myself. Luckily though, Andy begins to realize exactly where these issues originated from in the next few chapters. I think they were some of the hardest for me to write.