Yeah I so get that he was paralyzed. But maybe just say 'machines that were keeping him alive' instead of life support. I know that sounds redonkulous cause duh a machine thats keeping you alive is duh well life support, but saying 'life support' makes me automatcally think breathing machine. Just saying 'machine' sounds all mysterious. Is it for his kidneys? his liver? his heart? I dunno. Im not a doctor. Or dont change anything. Im just wierd. And I know you asked for comments but do you really care what one crazy chick from jersey says. =) I'll leave you alone now...