ok I've caught up to you, reading 9 chapters in one evening.. dang I will be useless at work tomorrow.. anyway I like how you are filling out your characters, the relationships among the trio and the order allo quite interesting, I guess it takes making certain assumptions about people and their intentions.. I can't help but think of dumbldore as a manipulative git and Ron as not the right one for Hermione, but even so you seem to be writing them well. Thanks for the story thus far, looking toward seeing where it goes..
TimW
Author's response
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it so far.