Shel, you are amazing. Seriously. I want to hug you right now because this story just rocked that hard.
Ah!!! And I can't believe you stopped right there!!! That was evil, really. You shouldn't do that to your poor fans. Our hearts just can't take it.
And omg, you totally made me believe everything! Your discription of the house and all that was in it seemed just on the mark. I probably should have rated this as ambiance because I soooo felt like I was there- like I could touch that doll or fall through those steps.
Now, what can I do to get you to update again soon??? I need some more of Lindsey and I KNOW you're just holding another chapter all nice and ready for reading. (Because, you know, you're responsible like that) Anyway, you're amazing, as I said before. Update soon, my friend! You totally have me on the edge of my seat!
Author's response
Hugs are pretty much my favorite. haha. I do what I can to keep you coming back for more lol even if that means torturing you with cliff hangers. I think I've snuck my way into way too many old houses for my own good. Some things you just remember. As for updates, you know way too well how far in advance I have this story written (although if I don't get writing again I will run out of chapters sooner then I would like to). I think you've also figured out the secret to sneak previews haha. If only all were that lucky. : )