you are such a good writter.
seriously, then ends always make me wanna go, 'Wow...'
and they don't sound cliche either, which can be extreemly annoying. usually stories like this, i would expect cliche 'this is such a touching chapter' endings...but with your story...'wow' endings just kind of flow.
please keep on writting.
i wonder if this is ever gonna turn into a romance...??
love the story lots and lots
-wyno
Author's response
sounding cliche is one of my worst fears. That along with my tendency to get bored quickly is probably the reason for writing stories full of so much drama. Although another one of my biggest fears is being too dramatic. As for a love story, I took into account Lindsey's past when dealing with that. It's probably one of the slowest moving tangents of the plot. Rest assure that one day it should arrive. Should?