Its good, but Archie seems a little out of character, but hey not much. and you have a right to make him act different around julius, the only part where he seamed out of character was when he talked to Athena, i always though he was more of a person to deal with it on his own. But hey its your story and its good so far. Please dont feel bad about me saying archie is out of character, you probably just needed him to talk to athena for the plot.