Well done for portraying the horror of the situation without over-doing the graphic violence. A difficult thing to do, but you just seem to be able to pull it off with ease.
And no wonder she is so uber fucked up.
I just love this.
Author's response
There's that word Uber again. haha I love it. Although I do have to say that my favorite word of all time is eloquent, not sure why, other than I just like how it sounds. As for the violence in this chapter, I rewrote it alot before finding a balance I found suitable. I've pretty much fallen in love with reading all the reviews everyone leaves! They definitely get me exciting to post the next chapter!