Fuck Archie, what's his problem with AtlantaXHerry. The gang doesn't know still that Neil is playing chess? Oh wow! Poor Jay, his mother passed away. Odie looks quiet. And what the hell?! Archie wanna kills 1 of his friends? That's not cool. If it's a villan it's ok to kill, but his friends, no way! I'll hate him in that fanfic. HerryXAtlanta looks like a good couple, why do that couple in that fanfic. Well it's your fanfic, I only wondered that's all.
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Lol interesting rewiew.