"she was teetering on the edge of more then just the apartment building" What a line that is.Seriously, just- ah!
And Patrick? What the hell! I suppose he's just kind of looking out for Andy, but talk about insensitive.
Great chapter. Your beautiful writing never ceases to amaze me.
Author's response
You have no idea how excited I get when people pick out my favorite lines from chapters. It makes me feel like I just accomplished something huge. haha, but I could just be weird. This one was my other favorite "She chose not to move because she was afraid of falling (not just off the roof)." mostly because I liked the fact that I was able to hint at the fact that Lindsey found falling in love just as frightening as losing her life. I love how much everyone likes this story. It's kinda like we're all in on something awesome lol. Yeah. I really have to go back to eating my frosted animal crackers and not talking for the night, lol.