Good story. I liked the prologue. I hope you don't have Harry's vaults controlled by Albus because of what happend in chapter two. I think the goblins are smart enough not to get envolved. I mean if they were to mess with Harry's vaults and Harry would find out Harry could press charges as well as remove all of his money from the goblins care. That would be a big blow to the goblins if Harry went public with what they did. They could lose a lot of customers that way. Oh and you asked about a mentor for Harry on dlp.net if I am not mistaken. I think that you should set him up with a exmember of the department of mysteries. Oh well update soon.