Ok.
First: I love the flashbacks. We are finally getting to see where Bea's and Pete's relationship once was and it was fabulous!
Second: I love the scene that played out between them in the present. They are going back to their old ways and it is so so so cute.
Third: You my dear a uber fantastic and you should be very proud of this story. It evokes a lot of emotion and you are doing a great job!
Fourth: Smooches and Points to YOU!
Author's response
I love thee xxxx