Miss Katy. You are inspiring. This chapter makes me want to go and write. Here's what I liked:
1. You gave us a taste of what their relationship used to be like via vividly depicted flashbacks. I love flashbacks.
2. Bea forgave Peter even after he almost killed her. I love a semi-happy ending.
3. Pete is so wonderfully complicated.
4. Sarah is a complete bitch and rightfully so. If some hussy was going after my hubby (whether or not the relationship was ending) I'd claw the bitch's face off. I love how snarky she was. Villians are so in right now.
And here's what I didn't like:
1. Sarah ruining the moment.
2. Pete STILL doesn't know what his kid. I'm tingling with anticipation. Put me out of my misery!!!!
3. Where was the biscuit?
Overall, I'm in love :)
Author's response
You know, you don't have to be so amazing, I already love you a whole heap. But I guess now you just me feel a whole lot better about this chapter. xx