Nice, very nice. Please update soon. Do you know how hard it is to not read all the stories being posted, i really did not want to so that i would not take someone elses idea (odvoulsly i broke down, i am reveiwing this, i broke after posting a letter for dad.)
Author's response
Thank-you, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. And I am very glad that you broke down and began to read stories and review!