Ooh, its all getting complicated now.
It's brilliant how you showed just how alike the two girls are, without them even so much as interacting with each other.
And I'm amazed how quickly I change sides with the different perspectives.
This is really cleverly written.
Great stuff. Keep it coming, ladies xx
Author's response
Lol come back to my side! Leo is surely better than stupid Syd...haha kidding i love them both! Complicated indeed...wait till the next few chapters! Thanks for reviewing my lovely! XX