Review for Tourbus Trauma

Tourbus Trauma

(#) xImRadx 2007-04-24

ASHLEY MUST BE ELIMINATED... NO SLEEPING NEXT TO BRENDON!!! KILL THE DISTRACTION, SHE WILL ONLY STAND IN MY WAY...

-takes a deep breath-

Phew... okay sorry... I had a Brendon fan girl attack. I'm okay... -takes another deep breath- Ashley is cool, I didnt meen what I said. I just had a protective moment. Lol. XD

So wow, this chapter was kinda confusing and sad and happy all at the same time... it was like a rollar coster of emotion. Lol, that was gay...

So her and Ry are cool? Or no? They kinda confused me in this chapter. And Pete is sad... really sad... I hate seeing my Petey sad. It makes me sad.

PETE IS SO SAD HE SAT NAKED ON A TOILET FOR NO REASON... THAT IS PRETTY DESPERATE!! Lol.

And OMG!!! What is Pete gonna do? Kill Ryan to get him outa the way? Has he gone that mad? Gotten that needy? Bad Peter!!! You leaf (yes leaf not leave) Ry Ry alown... (yes alown not alone. My vocabulary owns.) I hope everything works out, so that everyone is happy and noone dies. Cause that could suck cause I love all of the males in this story. Lol. Maybe RyRo can end up with Ashley... SO SHE DOESNT GET IN THE WAY OF ME AND BRENDON AND OUR HAPPY LIFE TOGETHE--- Err... never mind. Evil fan girl mode started to take over again. Haha.

Either way, Pete and Isaab belong together OBVIOUSLY duh. I love you Amanda, of course this was amazingly well writen like always cause your the shizz!!!!

Much luff... thanks for making such a wonderfull fan fic btw! My two fav bands in one story, it doesnt get much better. Well, actually, it does... if you added My Chemical Romance, and I was with Brendon -cough- orfrankiero
-cough cough- haha. Theres that pest cough again. But still, you got pretty cclose... XD

Well i'm done taking up room. I love ya... keep writing. I'll of course always keep reading! Much Luff...

The one they call Rad.

Author's response

Sweetie, it's ALYSSA not Ashley. LOL. I was first wondering why the hell you were verbally killing a girl named Ashley then I came across Bden's name and I just fell of this defected chair laughing. LOL. I am going to write you that story, believe me. That story that will end with you giving me a nephew (yes, I am in the damn story too). Love you crazy, The One That Believes Them.