And I thought you just made a surrogate Hermione of Marietta and left Hermione out of it. But then you come with the "Oh, I've loved you for the last five years. - Me too." thingie. Urgh.
The fight however wasn't that bad and there was a quite nice and original emotional scene (with Phaedra, not the crap with Hermione).
Author's response
Thank you for reading and responding, and thanks for your candor, if you don't like something I write feel free to say so. I guess you feel the H/Hr relationship has become cliche? I have a confession to make though, I love Hermione Granger, and I believe that she and Harry are made for each other.
I do plan to use Phaedra in some of my later fictions though, I feel she has potential.