The spelling errors are very distracting -- I have a hard time getting into a story when even characters' names are misspelled. Yes, spelling is hard and not everyone is naturally good at it, but that's no excuse! You have spellcheckers and Google to use, and you can ask a friend to check over your writing for you. Take your time and make every story the best it can be. Reviewers keep telling you to work on your spelling because we want to see you grow as a writer, not because we're trying to be mean.
Author's response
i cant hav my friends check it...they dont know i write storys...it's not much of a goth thing in there heads... any way i for once just want a reveiw that is good and does not complan about my gramer, ant the reson sephys name is spelled wrrong because the spell check said sephiroth was wrong and-and hey! IF U READ THE 2 LAST CHAPERTERS U WOULD OF SEEN I SPELLED SEPHY RIGHT!