Very good! Characters are truely IC, despites Auron and Rikku being difficult to deal with.
Where was the original post on LJ?
Author's response
Thank you! I was worried about whether theu were IC, because the original request was for an Auron/Rikku piece which is a hellish pairing at the best of times. So thanks for that, too!
The original post on my fic-comm is here: (http://community.livejournal.com/inkandkarma/9938.html)
And the post to FFEX is here: (http://community.livejournal.com/ff_exchange/19289.html)