wonderful start to an interesting story! i love your style of writing, by the way. You're hilarious! Joe's personality fits him well and i really love beagles so you get extra cool points. i can't wait to read more!!
favorite line: Joe looked at Dax. Dax looked at Joe. Joe opened his mouth. Dax tilted his head and wagged his tail. Joe closed his mouth again and shook his head. Animal cuteness: 1, human authority: 0.
Author's response
Wow, thank you for your reviews! :)