Aha!! I tracked you down yet again. I think I took a bit to come back here to find you, though.
Just as good as the first(second, third, nth) time I read it. Though you still missed a few spelling errors. Silly site hides the story from me while I review, so I can't just give them to you. Might email it later...
Anyway, very glad to see you are continuing to share your glorious works with those outside of TFF. Will be looking forward to more 'published' works. Until next time.
~Skelethin