I remember reading this over at ff.net, back when I first started really going there addictively.
I remember liking it and I'm glad I re-read it. It took some time since I keep posting at gaia and my attention drifted, but once I started, I got sucked in until I finished. I had one of those "this tastes so good I hope I never reach the bottom" but when you do, it fills you up. :)
Er, not sure where I'm getting at. It's an eerie one shot, but it's eerie in a good way.