Review for Chaos Chronicles - In the Beginning

Chaos Chronicles - In the Beginning

(#) g-spawn 2006-06-11

So Rachel helped you out on that one? She told me this was good, but I didn't think she'd be serious. BTW there are still issues with the story, but you've likely been beating youself with a stick about that (or so Rach told me). Keep it up (not the stick beating but the writing).