Oh Ryan! My whole world and everything in it just kinda stopped as I read through this, I've had it before when I've been into a reallyREALLY good book and it's like I just get to escape into a little bubble. That's what your story does to me and that's just amazing incase you're wondering.
I think the transition of everything in this chapter was excellent, the dialogue was brilliant and youe descriptive use of body language was again key to setting ambience of this chapter.
You are a gifted writer. I'm proud to be in the DoJ with you. Thank you for letting me escape for 10 minutes. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author's response
Love you, Katy! You always make me feel special...er...the good special. But I don't think I'd be half the writer I am without you and the rest of our family. You guys make me step it up. I hope you know that.