Despite the "triteness", I really enjoyed this update. Once again, this story breathes fresh air into the pokemon world. One of my favorite shattered cliches in this chapter is probably the idea that most pokemon trainers succeed and don't have any second thoughts.
Looking forward to more, but with updates like this, I could wait months.
Author's response
Yes, I know, write faster . Forgive me, I'm a bad updater... My writing usually occurs in bursts and pauses, so I could write three chapters in quick time, and then go five months without finishing the fourth because the inspiration ran out on me, and didn't even leave a note.
Thasnk you for the encouraging words. It's always wonderful to hear that I've been shattering cliches. ^^