Talk about finding the route straight to a girls heart, Mr Stump!
"You cooked a delicious dinner. The least I can do is the dishes."- yeah, that right there makes him marriage material!
And not losing the plot when an obnoxious boy asks inappropriate questions. But, yeah, I've totally got sympathy for Jeremy anyway, even if he is the epitome of evil right now.
And the colouring book thing. Just too funny that he was still colouring when she came back. Hell, that made me laugh like a mofo.
But you brought tears to my eyes with the daddy conversation. That hit close to home. You wrote that so beautifully.
Well done, for evoking so many emotions in one update.
You are tremendous xxx
Author's response
Miss Ria! I'm sorry about the daddy conversation from a human's standpoint. But as a writer, I'm pretty psyched. Making people feel any sort of emotion is my goal. :)