Nice chap! I was extremely happy that Sophia had come into the fic again but then you just had to make her leave almost straight away! :(
I do hope that you keep them paired and not have it a H/Hr ship, or if not how about a H/So/Hr one? Hermy can be their 'pet' ;p
I'm not sure whether it was your writing or if there is more to it but I doubt Lanus would send a crusier for 'test runs' - so what I'm thinking (or hoping?) is that this is the first of many ships and they are going to make a new Lanstri empire in this dimension? crosses fingers
Anyway's keep up the great work!