Well, I have to say that you did take this story in some directions that I didn't think about. I did enjoy it quite a bit. I do hope that you kept notes on some of your unfinished subplots, and intend to use them. The Potter Posers in this last chapter could be utilized interestingly. I hope that you consider that. In addition, Hermy's emaciated fun-bags need attention. With so much weight loss when that happens don't they end up looking like rather poorly shaped raisins that had spent too long in the bath? Absolutely an excellent way to end this one, but you have to set the book to complete now. :)
Geovanni Luciano