Review for Syndrome's Lullaby

Syndrome's Lullaby

(#) serafina20 2005-07-13

This was a very cute story. I loved all the things Syndorome did to try and calm Jack Jack down. That being said, you need a little work on the formatting and you seem to be missing some punctuation. I'd love to see the story fleshed out a bit more, too (but that's a personal thing). Thanks for sharing.