Now this is an interesting story. I like the background you're giving and I suspect the upcoming battle is going to be a most nasty one. I also suspect that the active participation of the ghosts on the side of Light will be an unexpected rude surprise for Tom. Since he was the one who, slightly indirectly killed Myrtle, I wonder if his death will return her to life or if something else does? It will be most interesting to see who survives the battle and who doesn't.
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, it really helps. The ghosts will definitely play a large part in this story; it is after all, primarily a ghost story . . .
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