Review for The Pride of Gryffindor

The Pride of Gryffindor

(#) twilliams1797 2006-06-17

I think I accidentally rated this story.. didn't intend to. but I DO like the story and look forward to when the next installment is.. It's kind of nice to see Harry pulled back from the superharry with a reasonable explanation..and the relationship with Ginny .. I can relate to how he feels, having been there myself. ..and the potential for the Dudly relationship.. this guy has rewritten himself, the polar opposite of everything he was, or so it seems. will he dye his hair black and go goth?heh...the short chapters are a bit abrupt, but that quality demands good editing, gotta fit so much action between the commercials, an episode in 4 acts, 43.5 minutes. until next time..