Once you got past all the backstory chapters and into telling Harry's story I really liked this story. That is until this latest chapter. I'll probably still continue to read but I must say that the whole Hermione pairing with someone old enough to be her father is off-putting to say the least. I'll admit that when you wrote about the breakup between her and Ron that you were leading toward the Luna/Harry/Hermione that appears in many of your stories. Oh well, I guess I can only try to not let this one part sour the rest of the fic.