So. Awesome.
I've been looking for a good Patrick fic for I don't know how long. This def looks like it's gunna hit the spot ;). You have good articulation and diction, but don't get too carried away with it to the point where you lose a sense of style. The heroin and preschool marriage were very nice touches. I'm so excited for the 4 year old to meet Patrick lol. I think they'll get along nicely. Btw, thanks for ur review of my one shot ;).
-niki
Author's response
Happy to quench your Patrick fic thirst. Thank you very much for your honesty. Sometimes I do lose my point, but I'm working on it :)