Well so far I can say its extremeley well written, also the story plot is quite interesting although alittle angst. Thinking on it some it kind of turns my stomach about bella raising harry, until I know more about the raising him good part, good for who her and the purebloods or her and what is right!?! well just have to wait and see. if it turns out to be good then I hope she also exposes him to the muggle world, since his mums from there.
Author's response
I don't have any intentions of turning this story into an angsty mess, but I think it'll have a bit more mixed in than Stolen Magic for now. Things will cheer up, but there's going to be a lot to be unhappy about.