I loved it. I like it when Harry thinks with his brain. I don't like people bashing JK Rowlings either but my main problem with Harry is how he never thinks before he acts, he jumps head first and whines about the consequences later. I like how you made Ron a spy. Most of the time Ron is kind of useless and never does much but having him do something proactive was a good thing. The rivaliry between Hermione and Tracey is funny. Harry sleeping with Cho and then dumping her just to get to Cedric was priceless. Can't wait to see how else Harry is different. Keep up the good work.