ok so Gwennie this was fabulous - and i didn't think it could get any better than what i read last night but you totally just went above and beyond.
The beginning was kind of sad, i just wanted to hug little Ava and tell that creepy man to peace out - i hope he didn't do anything to her or else i'm going to have to morph myself into fiction world and kick his ass - and i'll do it too.
the second part of the chapter literally made my life - and who are these Alex and Rindi characters? they sound amazing and fabulous, lol.
Such a great job Gwen really. No need to worry about this chapter you did fabulous - you don't give yourself enough credit.
i'd give you all my points if i could but for right now i think i'm going to settle with exciting cause i would put funny but the first half of the chapter wasn't funny - so exciting it is.
love you times infinity.