(#) Binny 2006-06-21
You know, I've never actually thought of it that way before. It was always "one of those things that just happens and no one questions it" kind of thing. The opening of the joke shop thing that is.
Oh man. My heart goes out for Luna. I wish you would have picked someone else though. I really like Luna's character and yea... Her getting that kind of "treatment" doesn't sit well with me.
Other than that, great chapter. Even if the Heroes are getting their collective asses kicked this round.
Author's response
The joke shop always seemed like a really bad idea to me. This was a necessary, but brutal chapter in the story. I try to make it up to Luna by featuring her heavily in Bungle in the Jungle, but what happened in this story was a key event that will trigger several of the main plot points. As for the heros getting their asses kicked, one thing that seems to be lost on the reviewers here and at FF(dot)net is that the dark side lost the leader of the largest werewolf pack in Britain and several of his lieutenants killed offscreen. So its not as bad as you might think. There are some major battles and much more character death coming soon. War is hell after all. Jim