awesome chapter and I so can't wait to read the third chapter and do keep up the awesome work, I think I might go to fanfiction.com and read the 3rd chapter just because this story is so cool, update soon and keep up the good work:):):):):):):):)
Author's response
I plan to change the story slightly from FFN - some of the smutty scenes had to be reined in. It well be improved.