Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01

This was too sweet. I laughed when she thought about how comfortable he was. I bet he is.

Nothing bad can happen as long as you don't let it. But this time that wasn't the case; Wendy had left her invincible armor at home, and in doing so, put a chink in Ava's. This line really stuck with me. I thought it was well-written and it really showed how Ava was falling apart, without actually saying that Ava was falling apart.

Love love love.